Our initial Critique:
- The music video is missing lots of footage- This is because we have not finished certain scenes which include lip singing and playing the piano.
- The footage has not been rendered so it isn't very good quality at the moment.
- The birthday scene was filmed in low lighting and when we added an effect to brighten the footage it lowered the picture quality - We aim to fix this by making it look like a home movie by applying a record and time effect on the main production.
- The narrative has not been made clear to the audience as we are missing the footage needed that explains what the skeleton is a metaphor of.
Questions for our audience:
- Do you think our video matches the genre of the music well?
- Do you understand the narrative?
- What type of audience do you think would like this video?
- Which channels do you think this video would be aired on?
- Can you tell that there are issues with white balancing in the video?
- Do you think we have incorporated our props effectively? i.e the skeleton
- Do you think we have used humour well in our video?
- What would you do to improve our video?
- Do you think the lip syncing looks natural in the video?
- What do you like about the video? What have we done well?
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