You have taken the lead role in this production which shows maturity and a will to get ahead.
There are ideas here which show promise and I hope that you develop the
skeleton idea into a firm narrative. You
showed the development of ideas
However, the pitch was basic and did not provide a full explanation.
At present there is one member carrying the group and you need to work
as a team.
Share things out and get together to work as a team.
Gather momentum by preparing a productions schedule which you follow.
Explain the performance element
How will you brand the artist?